Tuesday, August 7, 2012

Part 2 of my story

It was two hours later, and Andy was outside in the garden digging for worms. She had a simple plan for that night; she had asked her mom if they could have pasta for dinner, and her mom had said yes. When it was time for dinner she would offer to dish out the pasta. She would have worms in her pocket, and when she gave Jessie hers she would slip the worms into it. Then Jessie would eat the worms. Just thinking about eating worms made Andy shiver, but it was the perfect revenge. 
“What are you doing Andy?” asked her mom.
“Oh, I’m watering the garden,” said Andy, hurriedly picking up a watering can. “Oh, I just ran out of water, I’ll be right back.” 
Andy walked around to the front of the house to pretend to fill up the watering can but then she thought: I’d better actually fill it up in case mom comes to see where I am. So she filled the watering can, but then she ran inside to her bedroom to put the worms there until dinner. Then she ran outside to water the garden. Just wait until tonight, I think my plan is going to work.

I hope you like it!


  1. Nice story Maddie! :) Now, the critic that I am, I will offer you one small tip. You can take it or leave it.

    If your thoughts are italicised, there's no need to write "I thought. :) Just a tip!